tell the story through any of the characters eyes( mother, father, Hansel, Gretel or the old woman.)
" oh father. where are we going?" asked Hansel. " we are going to the forest to find some wood to chop. while i do that i want you to watch your sister and stay by the fire until i come back and get you guys. i want you guys to sleep until then." father said. "okay if you say so." we were walking through the woods then we stopped. father made a fire for us and gave us both a piece of bread to eat and then go to sleep until he comes and picks Gretel and me up.
we both fell asleep when Gretel woke up she was crying. " its dark Hansel. where is father.?" she said sadly. " i don't know. but when the moon rises in the sky where we can see we would go home. until then we stay here where we are." i said in low, soft voice.
the moon was in the sky now we can see were we was going. "We are about 20 feet from home we are all most home." I said to cheer her up. from the distance where we where at i could see the light of the house on so i went straight same direction where i seen the light coming from.
Gretel comes out yelling"we're home. at last!" we went into the house.
"you never came and got us? you forgot about us."i said in a mean voice. " I'm sorry i did forget about you. it just that i had to go back home and bring a bin with me that time to put the wood in. but instead i staid home and fell asleep. I'm sorry you two." in anxiety.
the next day we went to the wood s again. further in some where i had never been at. father said that there was better wood this time. i left a trail of crumpled bread to find my way back in case he left us. he built another fire we slept we woke up. it was dark i couldnt see the crumpled bread trail. gone. all gone. we walked to this house. an old women oped the dor let us in and we slept on the beds which felt like heaven. t
the next mornining came and she grabed me and but me in a stable in the back of the house. then she made my sister to bring me food to make me fat. soon after that Gretel came out running and saved my life. we left and we couldnt cross the bridge. but there was a little white duck. so we called it over and took one by one across the river. then he were save and alive.
